The structure is really good. Congratulations. Very easy to read. Be careful with:"they must divorce" = it's too strong, it's an obligation. "they should divorce" (l.5)"in the future get on well" = you need a subject THEY?? (l.10)"is good divorce" = "divorce is good" (l.11)"the person that aren't" = "the person that isn't" (l.12)"and forced" = "is forced" (l.12) YOU NEED TO FINISH THAT SENTENCE, AS IT IS, IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE"if they divorce" = "if they get divorced" (l.13)Grade: 6,5
The structure is really good. Congratulations. Very easy to read.
ResponderEliminarBe careful with:
"they must divorce" = it's too strong, it's an obligation. "they should divorce" (l.5)
"in the future get on well" = you need a subject THEY?? (l.10)
"is good divorce" = "divorce is good" (l.11)
"the person that aren't" = "the person that isn't" (l.12)
"and forced" = "is forced" (l.12) YOU NEED TO FINISH THAT SENTENCE, AS IT IS, IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE
"if they divorce" = "if they get divorced" (l.13)
Grade: 6,5