jueves, 1 de diciembre de 2016

Writing 4

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  1. Be careful with:

    -"a palace of the boss" = "the palace of a boss" (l.1)

    -"her place, he" = "his place" (l.2)

    -"invites" = "invited" you're talking in the past, not in present (l.3)

    -"Swat" in capital letters (l.4)

    -"front of" = "in front of" (l.4)

    -"the boss explained me" = "explained to me" (l.5)

    -"I entry" = "I entered / went on" (l.8)

    Grade: 7,25

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